XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds (2024)

2012-06-16 23:23:52

Very nice visuals

So this was pretty neat, especially with pink floyd, you can never go wrong with pink floyd, the "VOICES" in this were pretty right on, and synked very good, and with the sprites that was a nice addition to this whole deal, sharp animation aswell, so overall you did a fantastic job showing good effort on putting all these elements together, The quality on the visuals was pretty good, thh onlything that is an issue and even that its not, is the size it kinda dragged on towards the end maybe because the 4 mb but besides all that this was pretty good, kinda like a music video, anyways decent flash here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I dont really have any helpful tips this time but maybe just make it shorter as it tended to drag on towards the end.

2012-06-16 23:23:06

Kinda interesting

This is interesting and i guess its for a class project of some sort, The whole idea, of it being educational was ok but kinda loses interest, i suppose if you styled it up with some nice visuals,and even backround effects around the work you god, kinda gotta keep the viewer interested, some tips on making it better would be some options to move along in your flash, and even some improved music and or more of the music, So anyways for what you did present it was pretty interesting just needed abit more interesting to it, maybe the tips above and below can help to make it better, untill then good luck i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some tips on making it better would be some options to move along in your flash, and even some improved music and or more of the music, some special effects and better visuals to keep the viewer interested.

2012-06-16 23:16:52

Needs more effort

This flash could be improved and have more effort, alot of little things, The animation and music were actually ok, allthough there could have been a better selection some parts just didnt seem to fit, Some backrounds are much needed even if it was some basic scenes, or even just some color added in the backrounds, but something is needed in those areas, The title of the flash was kind of bad but i guess it fit the content, so while this was a more bazar flash it did have some entertaining value and i did get a few laughs from it, so in those areas its good but still needs some improvments such as suggested above and below ofcourse,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Music was pretty good but another fitting choice might have fit better, Also some "BACKROUNDS" are much needed even if it was some basic scenes but really besides all that i thought this was pretty good.

2012-06-14 18:52:05

Differant

Ok so this was a lil differant, it was entertaining enough but was abit on the low end side of things on quality, the "VOICES" were ok but could have used some better direction and making the voices sound differant would have helped aswell, there was just alot of repettive-ness with the jokes and all, The "ANIMATION" could be directed alot better aswell, as it was kinda poorly handled, Some of the jokes were pretty good and i got a few lauhs but for the most part they could have been better and more creative with the humor. so there is some more effort that can be done, wich i have stated already, anyways good luck on your next piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are a number of things that could be worked on >> Voices were ok but could have used some better direction and making the voices sound differant would have helped, and then there was the animation kinda sloppy and could have been abit more smoother. some of the jokes were stale could have been more creative there.

2012-06-14 18:50:47

Funny and random

First of all congrats on the daily 4th thats always a blessing, so good job on that, andespecially great job on the humor you really put the effort and brought in alot of humor, making it randomly funny and amusing so another props to you there, There was alot of detail, it could however use some more sudio Sound/fx though as it lacked in that area and bringing in more sounds and stuff would make it even better then it already is, size was good not too big and not really small but just right with the right amount of humor and randomness i really enoyed this and had alot of fun with it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much to say here, as everything was right on, the one thing that did lack was that it didnthave alot of sounds and sound/fx and thats something that could be worked on.

2012-06-14 17:41:53

Cool zombies

Zombies are always great, and i loved watching this, lots of zombies lots of action and lots of killing, and you were even able to throw in some "HUMOR" so for those aspect of things, it was pretty fun packed, and love all the action, but mainly the zombies, I thought you could have managed to make it somewhat longer, but for the mostpart it was pretty good as it is, now as for improving you could spice up the "GRAPHICS" abit more, more goulosh and gore wouldnt hurt either, but other then that this was pretty good, keep up the good work, i wouldnt mind seeing more like this, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
now as for improving you could spice up the "GRAPHICS" abit more, more goulosh and gore wouldnt hurt either

2012-06-14 17:37:59

Good story to start

~~REVIEW~~
A good flash here i love how you kept itwith some "SUSPENSE" and kept it very interesting so with this one the story kept upto par, The character was good and you gave good story around that character so this was pretty good if you ask me, The ending with blowing up everything was odd but it was kind of amusing aswell, Some other fantastic pieces in this besides the story was how nice the artwork looked youput in the time and it shows, But anyways this was a pretty good flash, and i got some good entertainment from it so awsome job hope to see more soon this was pretty good if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring more silly and more random thats what really pushed this toon over the edge for me

2012-06-14 16:48:20

Entertaining and amusing

Ok so i found this flash to be pretty interesting and slightly entertaining, its one of those flash pieces thats grabs your attention and keeps you there, i like the style and direction you took with this, anyways great start to a decent flash. So there was not much of a story but with how you presented it i guess there was no need, but it was pretty entertaining, it was kind of on the short side, so maybe make it longer with abit more content next time, but overall this was a pretty good tune, not too much to add, except adding more to it but not by much, but great flash i really enjoyed it, heep up the hard work, as i know these flash types and styles can take time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So things to improve on its always hard to improve on every little thing but. there could be some small improvments here and there, so i took a little time to maybe help and improve on this, below are one or two suggestions that i hope can make things better for all. So for this flash works i thought there could be more "CONTENT" maybe make it longer since it was kind of short, other then that it was a pretty solid tune.

2012-06-11 19:40:54

This was notbad

Well this was notbad it was ok i thought the "ANIMATION" was very welldone smooth and just flows so nicley, so that was a plus there, Animation was good but maybe abit more smoother in parts here and there, Now i must admit it was neat seeing a pokemon as its been years and years, Seemed abit on the simple side though, but that was ok i thought, Maybe because it was just a little here and there and could have used abit more to it then you had, Not much to this but the animation and design of this all was pretty good i thought, now if anything i guess some smoother flowing animation but the rest was pretty good if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Animation was notbad but maybe more smoother in spots here and there, but really besides all that it was alright.

2012-06-11 19:07:31

Interesting flash

I got a kick out of this one, has some good humor, as there is alot of stuff going on and lots to see, allthough there could be more "ACTION-SCENES" and such but there was still alot going on, very random and amusing, There is some real funny and amusing parts so you did fantastic on bringing the humor out on this, so once again awsome job there, also want to mention how well the "ANIMATION" cameout and flowed well with everything else comming along, and as to improve on something like this not sure but maybe start off with adding more action scenes as suggested.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To start off you could use some more action, more action scenes, besides that i thought it was ok stuff.